tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3386668104138512969.post2511766049721085793..comments2014-04-08T12:48:26.101+02:00Comments on Creative Writing Vejen Business College: Travel writingBenthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11845712266620744382noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3386668104138512969.post-29181064411778007932014-04-02T13:49:12.215+02:002014-04-02T13:49:12.215+02:00That's a do-over, Jacob!That's a do-over, Jacob!Laila Thimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13545388289453885986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3386668104138512969.post-85561706816602976402014-04-02T08:37:04.889+02:002014-04-02T08:37:04.889+02:00Far too random to work as travel writing - a non-f...Far too random to work as travel writing - a non-fiction genre of text<br /><br />I liked this sentence: "Chanel and Billy are shocked and they look like Mona Lisa in the face, completely frozen." That is creative, interesting and funny use of the ingredients.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759940578209735828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3386668104138512969.post-57400180667716482402014-04-01T22:05:41.311+02:002014-04-01T22:05:41.311+02:00Far too random to work as travel writing - a non-f...Far too random to work as travel writing - a non-fiction genre of text. This reads like an absurd sit-com manuscript, introducing characters like "Jacob" at the end without warning. Not good.<br />I liked this sentence: "Chanel and Billy are shocked and they look like Mona Lisa in the face, completely frozen." That is creative, interesting and funny use of the ingredients.Benthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11845712266620744382noreply@blogger.com