tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3386668104138512969.post3568030704793939061..comments2014-04-08T12:48:26.101+02:00Comments on Creative Writing Vejen Business College: Shakespeare - RewrittenBenthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11845712266620744382noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3386668104138512969.post-16520195858835144882014-04-01T18:58:57.705+02:002014-04-01T18:58:57.705+02:00Most of the story is there, but you forgot the pun...Most of the story is there, but you forgot the punch-line: It is his poem that makes her immortal!<br />Good use of one-syllable words only.<br />I guess the word 'thou' confused you. It means 'you' in Shakespeare's time, so saying 'thou you' makes no sense. If you want to say 'though', that is a different matter!Benthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11845712266620744382noreply@blogger.com