tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3386668104138512969.post5932875131354415611..comments2014-04-08T12:48:26.101+02:00Comments on Creative Writing Vejen Business College: thoughtsBenthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11845712266620744382noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3386668104138512969.post-66827638487591848592014-04-01T19:57:08.505+02:002014-04-01T19:57:08.505+02:00So is this Shakespeare with a computer? Good idea!...So is this Shakespeare with a computer? Good idea!<br />You've got the story in just a few lines - nice...<br /><br />The spelling here needs improving: "youre" is not a word in English. It is either "your" which is a pronoun, or "you're" which is a contraction of "you are". I can't tell which one you mean to use when you write "and youre new start". When you write "Youre love", you probably mean "Your love", right?<br /><br />Also, "I" is spelled with a capital I in English. We put question marks at the end of sentences that are questions: "Shall I love you on a hot day?"Benthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11845712266620744382noreply@blogger.com