tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3386668104138512969.post9051165805125877322..comments2014-04-08T12:48:26.101+02:00Comments on Creative Writing Vejen Business College: Benthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11845712266620744382noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3386668104138512969.post-52628382776966436672014-04-01T20:00:09.052+02:002014-04-01T20:00:09.052+02:00Nice condensation of the poem. It comes as a surpr...Nice condensation of the poem. It comes as a surprise when we all of a sudden hear of a "he", though. Better to say "The poet trusts his poem". Under any circumstances it has to be "trusts". Maybe you wanted to use the past tense, but that would be "trusted" - and that is a two-syllable word!Benthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11845712266620744382noreply@blogger.com