am honored to be with you today at your commencement from one of the finest universities in the world. I never graduated from college. Truth be told, this is the closest I've ever gotten to a college graduation. Today I want to tell you three stories from my life. That's it. No big deal. Just three stories. Believe in yourself, that’s the most important.
Eh... "am honored"? Put in the "I", please!
ReplyDeleteIt is confusing that the speaker promises three stories, and doesn't tell any of them, don't you think?
Anyway, the three first sentences are copied from a Steve Jobs speech. That's cheating. If you did that in my class, you'd be accused of plagiarism and kicked out.