Hello
everyone!
Today I talk
about the weather, and how it’s affects we people. Both on ours mood and in
praxis. Today the weather is so good and the sun is shining. It’s 15 degrees
outside.
It is soon
summer, and that’s we love. We go to the beach and swim in the sea. Girls in
bikini, boys in shorts. Lots of suncreme on the kids.
But in the
winter time, the cold and the snow affect a lot on us. It’s all time dark
outside, and we don’t get the vitamins from the sun. All it’s more negative for
us.
Sometimes
there is Heathway in the summer, its over 35 degrees. But can the weather be to
hot?
Now I will
show you an overview for the weather for the two last years.
As you can see, the temperature is gone up year for year. But why?
As you can see, the temperature is gone up year for year. But why?
Now you should
search on you computer and find some reasons to why the temperature has done
up. You have a half hour.
It wasn't until the very end that I realized that this was (probably) a teacher's speech to the class. Could you make that clear from the beginning?
ReplyDeleteI don't see any trace of a backwards phrase being used in your text? Is there one, or did you forget?
The contents of the speech are OK - we get some facts and an argument. However, there is no real audience appeal in it.
A few mistakes: Look at your pronouns in the first line: "ours mood" should be "our mood". "How it's affects we people" - "it's" is a contraction of "it is", so obviously wrong use here. "We people" - why not write "us"? Much simpler, and correct. What about "Heathway"? Why a capital "H"? I imagine you mean "heat wave", no? Remember to proofread!