Thursday, March 27, 2014


Gone was it

Where is our love? Why do this world have so many racist? Our love to our fellow human being? Do we really have to judge people because of their skin and colours? Of course racism isn’t just about colour, but also your religion. People gets psylogical problems and some even commits suicide.

1 comment:

  1. The connection between the backwards phrase ("Gone was it") and the speech as such could have been clearer. I take it that it is 'love' that is 'gone' or missing, but that should have been made more clear.

    Also, we cannot really tell who is speaking, or whom he is speaking to, and the argument of racism leading to suicide is not really explained or exemplified. You could easily write a line or two more, making these things clear.


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