So is this Shakespeare with a computer? Good idea!You've got the story in just a few lines - nice...The spelling here needs improving: "youre" is not a word in English. It is either "your" which is a pronoun, or "you're" which is a contraction of "you are". I can't tell which one you mean to use when you write "and youre new start". When you write "Youre love", you probably mean "Your love", right?Also, "I" is spelled with a capital I in English. We put question marks at the end of sentences that are questions: "Shall I love you on a hot day?"
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