Thursday, March 27, 2014

The eye of the heaven

I would like to come to the sun, and see the love from it. The sun is hot, and fine. On a day with a blue sky, you can see the sun. The sun gives you life, and helps you through the day. A day can be hard and sad, but the sun can help you and give you life.

1 comment:

  1. Yep, you only used one-syllable words, alright (so, points for that) - but this is not the story that is in the Shakespeare sonnet, is it? Remember, the one with love and a summer's day that is less constant than the loved one, and the punchline being that it is a POEM that gives eternal life? That story.


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