Thursday, March 27, 2014

The sun

It is hard not to be with you, when you are so sweet and hot. The sun sees you the whole day, it helps you make it through the day. The whole world will now call you in mind, you will still be named many years from now.

1 comment:

  1. There is part of the story here, but not the whole thing - especially how the lines of the poem make her immortal could be made clearer.
    Good use of only one-syllable words!
    Where is the illustration?


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