Thursday, March 27, 2014

Travel writing

Brendan is on his way to Anfield, and on his way he sees a canary. It’s lunchtime and Brendan is hungry. He only has a few minutes to get something to eat, so he goes to Burger King. The sun is shining, at and all the women have Chanel lipsticks on so they looks like Mona Lisa. Brendan walks through the graveyard, when he sees a door with a sign on. The sign says, “Do not enter”. Brendan walks in, and sees the grave of John F. Kennedy. Brendan walks out again, while he eating his burger. Brendan is angry, because I he said I didn’t want to have tomato’s and cucumbers in his burger. On a bench on the graveyard there is a man reading a book called “Billy Elliot”. Billy Elliot walks through a hardware store to buy a lighter, so he can smoke a cigarette the rest of the way. Suddenly a man gets shot in the middle of the road, and perpetrator runs against Brendan. He has a Dessert Eagle in his hand. 

2 comments:

  1. Ehh? What was the 'plot' again? This is a weird mix of sort-of-like travel writing and a short story with no logic to it. The best sentence was this one: "The sun is shining, at and all the women have Chanel lipsticks on so they looks like Mona Lisa." That is creative, funny, and not too whacked out. The rest is exactly what the task said the text should not be: random.

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  2. I like your creativity Jacob. But why Brendan? I agree on Bent, nice one with Mona Lisa.

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