I am the sun and the sun is
me. The son is warm and it does me so hot – so hot that no one likes me. I am
too good for them. I am the best boy in the world.
Yep, you only used one-syllable words, alright (so, points for that) - but this is not the story that is in the Shakespeare sonnet, is it? Remember, the one with love and a summer's day that is less constant than the loved one, and the punchline being that it is a POEM that gives eternal life? That story. The only thing you caught of that is that the 'boy' (if that is Shakespeare) thinks highly of himself.
Yep, you only used one-syllable words, alright (so, points for that) - but this is not the story that is in the Shakespeare sonnet, is it? Remember, the one with love and a summer's day that is less constant than the loved one, and the punchline being that it is a POEM that gives eternal life? That story.
ReplyDeleteThe only thing you caught of that is that the 'boy' (if that is Shakespeare) thinks highly of himself.