1. Writing game 6 – The Exquisite
Corpse
His blue girl delicately adds her big computer.
Writing game 5 - rewrite of poem He is sweet, she is fine, the sun is hot, and so is she.
But the lines speak in a new way. The lines lives on, but she will not.
The sun is to her no good, she is the best.
His blue girl delicately adds her big computer.
Writing game 5 - rewrite of poem He is sweet, she is fine, the sun is hot, and so is she.
But the lines speak in a new way. The lines lives on, but she will not.
The sun is to her no good, she is the best.
I like the corpse being illustrated with Gustav Klimt's painting. Blue girls are more common than one might have thought.
ReplyDeleteThe poem rewrite works really well until the last line which makes no sense: "The sun is to her no good, she is the best." Did you mean that the sun is not as good as her - she is the best? In that case the order should be changed:
He is sweet, she is fine, the sun is hot, and so is she.
The sun is not as good as her - she is the best.
But the lines speak in a new way. The lines lives on, but she will not.