Thursday, March 27, 2014

Shakespeare story


1 syllable story
He loves her with all his heart, and thinks she is fair. The sun is too hot and then it’s too cold, but she will still be loved. The text he wrote is not of her, but of his cool text. She will be fair ‘till she fades, and then his text will still live on.  

1 comment:

  1. Yes, this one has the whole thing! I am not crazy about the part that goes "The text he wrote is not of her, but of his cool text", since it is rather unclear what this means (I know what you are trying to say, though) - so that could be reformulated... Otherwise, this is great!

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